Friday 2 October 2015

Can you write a descriptive paragraph about this picture?






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  1. I could feel the the breeze of the wind racing across the field, my curled up arms being stretched out longer than an eagles wing. The blistering sun at its highest point. The sky as blue as the ocean, wriggling my tiny toes into the brown soil, I can feel the happy atmosphere pouring in. White as snow clouds, dance swiftly, to and fro. Not a voice is heard but mine.

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    1. I love sitting in the grass and listening to the nature sounds around me while it's summer. One of the sounds I tune to first is the sound of the birds singing and chirping away as if they are creating a song. After sitting for a few minutes, I'll hear the light breeze coming down through the trees, rustling their leaves.

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  2. I stood up and let the fresh air surround my body. All I could hear is the sound of trees rustling in the wind and the birds singing. The sun was burning brightly in the ocean blue sky. I could smell the fresh earth beneath me. Everything around me was empty and desolate. I was find me alone with nature.

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  3. The glistening sun woke up the sleeping birds. My arms stretched up towards the ball of lava as fresh air flowed through my nose. Beaks opened; the birds began to chirp an elegant mid-summer melody while the calm breeze whispered over the emerald grass. Drifting above my head, were marshmallow clouds in the sapphire blue sky. This is what summer meant to me…happiness.

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  4. I could feel summer breeze flowing past. The sun brightly lit the blue sky. The clouds stood still looking like paintings. As soon as I could, I lay on the cool and luscious grass that lay before me.

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  5. I can feel the immensely long grass bushing up against my skin,as I see the sea blue sky get bigger and bigger every second.The soft,white fluffy clouds shape like delicious marshmallows.I hear the strong vicious breeze coming down through the waving trees shaped like skeletons reaching out to get you, with there leaves frantically rustling. No voice can be heard for miles, but mine

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  6. With the wind hurtling towards me, I could hear the grass swaying like the ocean on calm summer’s day. The clouds as soft as silk, grazing the bright sky. Arms extended, the breeze hit me like a volcanic eruption, except quieter. Blazing down on me, the sun is a dazzling star showing off all of its amazing tricks. Coiled around me, the grass comforted me as I wandered up the hill.

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  7. I could feel the rays of sunlight on me face with wind blowing gently on my arms. It felt as if I was touching the sky when my arms were stretched out as a eagels wing. The sky was as blue as the ocean and clouds as pure as snow.

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  8. Standing in the sunny landscape made my heart leap into glee.The sky was exquisite with the velvet clouds cascading the blueness.Nightingales twittering across the prodigious sun.The grass with millions of minute insects living in them,Grasshoppers chirping cheerfully.The crisp air disconnecting me from my difficulties of the other world.

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  9. Gurpinder.S blogger4 October 2015 at 13:05

    Standing under the nose of the bright blond sun I scoop up every ounce of vitamin D. The sky was exquisite with the smooth velvet clouds overlapping. The healthy emerald grass lied on the grass waiting...

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    1. I like the part where you said you were scooping up every ounce of vitamin D!

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  10. Time and time again, I would find myself stretching out on the luscious grass, sun finding its way into every edge, every corner of my body. The long, soft grass would tickle my feet, as the beautiful birds would sing and chirp around my head. Above me, the amber rays of sun kiss the clouds, rays pouring through every gap. It was wonderful, all in all. And as the sun slips through my fingers, I feel whole. Detached from the world, and its evilness, and its cruelty. I feel like one with nature, and I feel like I am the only one left.

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  11. The sun is facing the green,emrald grass standing there waiting for the rain.The clouds are facing the boy waiting there for exitement the boy faces the sun standing on the grass looking at the shining, gold sun in the sky of ocean water.Hes hugging the sky with breezes behind him tasting the air or wind smelling the fresh air outside in fin air waiting for the moment to arrive.

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  12. As the cool breeze brushed against my face my body relaxed as my heart was in a world of mythical animals. The insects chirped gleefully as the leaped and flew across the blue sky. Long grass brushing my body were people massaging me as if I was a great leader. Scorching Sun rays shone in my face as if I was rising into heaven. Put my arms across pretending to be an airbus. Fluffy clouds gradually move sometimes blocking the bright yellow Sun. The atmosphere cheerfully sing in pride.

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    1. The place where it said the in between as and leaped is supposed to be they

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  13. The morning ray of sunshine hit my face, as I smiled joyfully. Blue skys welcomed me into the gentle grass, as green as emeralds. I stretched so far that I cast a shadow on the ground that appeared like an angel stretching its wings. As I inhaled deeply, the fresh air flew through my nostrils. Silence was floating through the atmosphere. As the moon rose, and the sun melted away, I felt sadness creep over me, the beauty was gone.

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  14. I stretched out my arms as the soft breeze brushed past me swiftly. The bright green grass shone brightly in the amazing sun light, the clouds were soft cotton balls floating in the sky as bright as the radiant sun. I felt ecstatic as my heart skipped a beat and all I could hear was the graceful breeze through the swaying trees. There was no one in sight but just a beautiful, sunny and wistful landscape flooded with all the joyful things anyone could imagine.

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  15. When i stood in the breeze with the sun hot as fire the grass tickled me with laughter. I saw the earth move as the cloudes so silent but the tweeting birds were singing powerfuly and beutifuly. This day was a dream of cheer and laughter, i stood when the sun shot up with a bright shine in my eyes. The grass flew like a angle through the wind past my face and my body like a shooting star, my eyes shaterd as ice cause the sun was beaming my heart and would start pumping, At the corner of my eye, i saw a bird which sang so beutifuly my jaw would drop to the grass and tickle me with happines.

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  16. I felt the rock hard grass touching the sole of my shoes.As I looked up to brightly shining sun I felt the heat burning the inside of my body.I didn't have the temptation to look up at the sun again for a while that day.Instead I looked at the beautiful trees and the birds on them.The birds colours were bright colours such as blue,orange,yellow. The moment I looked at those beautiful birds they started to tweet and it made me want to listen to their wonderful sounds of nature all summer long.When the birds lost their energy to sing I calmly laid there and watched the sunset.

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  17. The bright golden ball broke out in the morning sky as the gentle breeze blew against my hair. Delicate senses touched my nose as the trees softly swayed against the bright blue sky. I capaciously filled my lungs with the fresh air around me as my heart started to turn into gold. A wide smile had appeared on my face as I let my hands free into the sky above me. Birds whistled out their song merrily and beautifully. It was like heaven! What an amazing time to have in the countryside.

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  18. As I stretched my arms out I felt the soft breeze embraced me and the scorching hot sun sharing its warmth with me. As I looked up into the ocean blue sky which elongated forever like a canopy over my head, I glanced the cotton clouds gracefully disperse as the wind softly swept past like a child blowing out a candle . I never felt so heavenly in my life! As I walked up the steep hill, I glanced a picturesque wistful landscape flooded with beautiful trees swaying in the breeze. I caught also glimpsed the emerald green grass dancing as the wind whistled a graceful tune......

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  19. I could feel the warm heat brushing swiftly across my face. It was peaceful, I could hear the birds chirping gracefully as I lay on the thick, luscious, emerald green grass silently thinking. Thinking about when there was going to be a perfect day like this ever again. Barely a cloud in sight, the warmness of the boiling, hot sun . Sweat trickled down my face, then I smiled happily and thought about a cool ice cream cooling me down.

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  20. My feet adored the warmth and comfortableness of the sun. I stood, arms out looking up at the gleaming, raging hot sun. The landscape intrigued me with wonder and amazement. The marshmallow-white clouds made my heart consume joy infinitely. I couldn't believe my eyes, liberty all around, it was full of possibilities. My eyes shot out do different places seeing things like beautiful chirping birds and wondrous grasshoppers as minute as an ant. The welcome greetings of the world just so happen to occur ten years after I was actually born and was supposed to be welcomed. But then I knew. The reason that I hadn't seen what this world could do for me until now is because when I was a tiny baby I wouldn't have understood. Not at all. As I had finished pondering on the idea, the sun hit me like a bullet in the back! It was now shining on me with it's rays sweating me out within a seconds.

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  21. The cool summer breeze enveloped my body. The beaming red sun beating down on my exposed back. I could feel the strands of green grass move amongst my bate toes. Embracing the wind, stretched out my arm and led myself under the impression that I was flying.

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  22. Brilliant blue skies surrounded me, every edge of the world blanketed in luscious colours and beautiful, serene music, bounding in my ears as I inhaled the fresh air which filled my lungs to the rim. Without a care in the world, I let myself fall to the soft, gorgeously emerald green grass, icy cold against my skin - yet satisfyingly refreshing! Above, stood the golden sun, a ferocious ball with the powers of an amazing, fiery celestial god, its rays blazing down on us like a blessing from heaven - for who knows where we might be without our sun? Around it, float white, fluffy clouds of pristinely pearly snow, dancing elegantly. Laughter spills out of the atmosphere, elation and euphoria striding hand in hand through the warm, brown soil. I stretched adoringly at the scene - energy cascading through my veins - I leapt up like a bullet and immediately felt laughing grass tickling between my toes.

    And I'll never forget my time in heaven...

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  23. I could feel the cool breeze of the wind racing towards me. The golden sun lit up the day. I felt the strands of the fresh, green, grass surrounding my feet. I stretched my arms out, further then an eagle could. I heard birds tweeting like they were singing a song. Above me was the ocean blue sky, the clouds dancing like marshmallows on the dance floor.

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  24. I was surrounded by the wonderful blue sky and the lovely breeze blew past my face I felt legendary my hair brushed against my face. The grass tickled my toes just like the tickle machine.

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  25. A contented and tall man opened his arms so wide, like he was trying to hug me. I shone done on him as his face was full of joy. The fluffy, white and light clouds shot away in every direction in fright, letting the blue sky stare at me. Emerald grass surrounded the man, who looked at me with a bit of sadness in his eyes. Then I remembered, he told me he was leaving today, this was is last day in this beautiful countryside.

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  26. I could feel the soft wind everywhere where i go. I love to play on the green bright grass. I like to look at the wonderful blue white sky and the yellow humangus sun. The grass looks like I can live there for ever.

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  27. The icy wind blew on my face as the round ball shon on my pale skin.The grass tickled my feet,and the blue sky filled with clouds surrounded me.I felt as if I would rise to heaven and so lifted my hand in the air.The birds chirped and I could see grasshoppers jumping from one leaf to another.This felt like Liberty.I was finally free from this world!Sweat dripped down from my face and I could hear it splash on the ground.

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  28. The emerald green grass glistened gloriously in the dazzling sunlight. The soft summer breeze whispered to me as it gently gushed past me. The clouds were big clumps of candyfloss moved slowly through the clear blue sky. I stretched my arms as if I was preparing to fly. I could feel the pleasantness of the warm sun gradually heating my arms. The sun was a marvelous magnificent ball of heat warming the grounds below.

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  29. Blue sky surrouned me ,the bright light shines above the surface of the earth .
    The emerald grass swings as the cloud makes shapes.
    Warm air condition my body as I move .

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  30. The beautiful blue sky surrounded me, the lovely green grass danced across the land the marshmallow clouds drifted through the sky.The sun shined towards the grass. A warm breeze flew by.

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  31. As the marshmallow clouds float around in the crystal clear sky, the emerald grass holds my feet tight. And I can feel the soft summer breeze warming me as the sun shines at me.

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  32. This was my day. A sapphire sky and emerald grass was the only thing to be viewed for miles on end. As I climbed up the verdant hill barefoot, a cool, refreshing breeze contrasted the bright summer sun. My loose, breezy blouse floated around me as if I was underwater. Soft, fluffy clouds glided through the ultra marine heavens. I just couldn't believe it. I had discovered a new world, probably the most bosky place to exist. It was jam packed with life. However, there were no other animals, humans, or aliens. Just me, and the landscape. So that meant no 'droppings', no pollution, and no concrete. Literally what I would describe as heaven. I wished I could stay there forever, but without knowing it, I was back again. And I just happened to be suck head first in my garden pond.
    Oh well, all magic comes with a price.......

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    1. Wow. I enjoyed the beginning of your paragraph. Such a punchy first line.

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